Comments on: The Last Knock Before Midnight – Part 3 http://vvrose.com/the-last-knock-before-midnight-part-3/ Embrace the Madness Sat, 16 Jan 2010 21:48:32 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.1 hourly 1 By: Vincent V. Rose http://vvrose.com/the-last-knock-before-midnight-part-3/comment-page-1/#comment-4 Vincent V. Rose Sat, 16 Jan 2010 21:48:32 +0000 http://vvrose.com/?p=61#comment-4 Hello Buffy, Your comments aren't too harsh. Thank you for the compliment about my style. I especially like the 'light quill' remark. Regarding your complaints I think you make some very valid points. I think, in hindsight, I made a mistake in seperating the story into as many small parts as I did. This has made it a lot slower to begin with than I'd like. If I was going to seperate them this much in future, I'd be sure to publish more quickly. About the characters, I'm not at all surprised you feel very little for them. This is something I hope to rectify as more of the story becomes live and you get to know Alice and the other mains a bit more. Thanks for reading =) Hello Buffy,

Your comments aren’t too harsh. Thank you for the compliment about my style. I especially like the ‘light quill’ remark. Regarding your complaints I think you make some very valid points. I think, in hindsight, I made a mistake in seperating the story into as many small parts as I did. This has made it a lot slower to begin with than I’d like. If I was going to seperate them this much in future, I’d be sure to publish more quickly. About the characters, I’m not at all surprised you feel very little for them. This is something I hope to rectify as more of the story becomes live and you get to know Alice and the other mains a bit more.

Thanks for reading =)

]]> By: Buffy http://vvrose.com/the-last-knock-before-midnight-part-3/comment-page-1/#comment-3 Buffy Sat, 16 Jan 2010 20:13:38 +0000 http://vvrose.com/?p=61#comment-3 I like the way you write, easy to read, light quill, but what I didn't like is the whole story - I mean it's not bad it's missing something captivating - I can't relate to any of characters so I don't really care what happened to them. Well it's maybe because it's just a beginning of the story and with the time it will have more actions, or maybe it just because chapters are to short - in my opinion :P I hope my comment wasn't to harsh? Ps. Sorry for my bad english, I understand everything but when it's coming to writing in English - I'm failure xD I like the way you write, easy to read, light quill, but what I didn’t like is the whole story – I mean it’s not bad it’s missing something captivating – I can’t relate to any of characters so I don’t really care what happened to them.
Well it’s maybe because it’s just a beginning of the story and with the time it will have more actions, or maybe it just because chapters are to short – in my opinion :P
I hope my comment wasn’t to harsh?

Ps. Sorry for my bad english, I understand everything but when it’s coming to writing in English – I’m failure xD

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